Tuesday, December 06, 2005

A Poem - "Corner Time"

How I hate Corner Time,
standing straight and tall.
But when you leave the room,
I slump against the wall!

I feel so very childish,
I feel so very small,
I feel so very angry,
as the clock ticks in the hall.

What time is it I wonder?
Why did you take my watch?
I cannot take this torment!
I didn’t ‘dis’ you much!!

I stare into the corner,
hands clasped behind my neck.
My angry tears start falling,
Oh, what the f---ing heck!!

I hear your footsteps coming,
Is this the end? I’m glad!
I smile at you angelically,
but you know that I’ve been bad!

You take the Loopy Johnny,
and whip my butt real good.
I must do Corner Time again,
but this time - it’s in the nude!!

C

10 Comments:

At 9.12.05, Blogger C's Correction said...

Thanks for your comment storm rider. I really appreciate it!
I think you've got a really cool blog! I love the American Indian Theme!

C

 
At 10.12.05, Blogger C's Correction said...

Thank you shyanne :) Sorry I havent been to your blog lately - been quite busy with family issues.
I hope you have a really lovely Christmas!

C

 
At 10.12.05, Blogger wind walker said...

thank you for stopping by my blog & bringing it to my attention that storm & i were kinda hard to track down!! i enjoy your blog and can't wait to read more from the both of you!!

 
At 10.12.05, Blogger C's Correction said...

Hi Wind Walker,
I have bookmarked you but would really like to link to you. May we do this? R doesn't come home till next week so if agreeable by you he will do it then (I'm a bit of a technophobe and have no idea how to do such things!LOL!)

What is that carving on your paddle? It looks like a root vegetable of some description? Is it a large oversized yam??

C

 
At 10.12.05, Blogger wind walker said...

actually, i'm not sure what a yam looks like (lol), but the design on my paddle is a feather that's wrapped on the bottom with ribbons. it's based on an native american custom and storm loves the idea of feeling a feather imprint...

i would love to be linked!

 
At 10.12.05, Blogger C's Correction said...

Sorry, we call them yams over here (UK) I think in the US and Canada you call them sweet potatoes?

R will link you in next week :)

When I was in college in the US I asked this guy sitting next to me if I could use his rubber - the poor guy looked totally freaked out! In the UK a rubber means an eraser! Believe me I never made that mistake again!! LOL!!

C

 
At 11.12.05, Blogger rivka said...

:) Great poem! Thank you for your comment on my blog.

 
At 13.12.05, Blogger C's Correction said...

Hi Storm rider,

I've never actually heard of Dwight Yokum? I didn't think there would be any songs about domestic discipline or corner time? Are there?

C

 
At 16.12.05, Blogger C's Correction said...

Storm, for a moment, I thought you were accusing me of plagerism. Lol!

 
At 16.12.05, Blogger C's Correction said...

LOL Storm you are funny! Ok, ok, I will get my lazy arse in gear and write something. The only prob is I don't have your imagination so can't think of anything to write. Also your blog is so colorful whilst mine is so boring!

R works away, I havent seen him for 2 weeks... so there hasn't been much opportunity to be punished for doing something naughty ;)

C

 

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